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Ok guys - this is your big chance to make Mrs Gomes smile! Today we would have been doing a big write - you have been planning your 5 paragraph evacuee diary, working on adding exciting vocabulary, extending your sentences and adding different informal features that really engage the reader. Go through the slides to prepare yourself.


This is your final write. Impress me!


There is a tick sheet below so you can check that you have included all the features. DON'T put every feature in every paragraph! 


Just like every big write - use at least 3 different pieces of punctuation - ! ? , ' ""

Open each paragraph in a different way - This morning, As I left the house, The train slowly picked up speed as 

Use at least 3 different conjunction - but, so, because, when, if, or